All Comments on 'A Simple Wish'

Unadorned raw sex. How nice!

A very good nasty story. As you said no build-up just down and dirty sex. A suggestion, maybe make them alittle longer.

Keep it up hellbaby.

Joel

Why can't more stories be like this! Complete sex. Nothing big and complicated, just sex. Fun, kinky, hot, dirty sex. The only thing that could make it better would be to make it a little longer with MORE kinky, hot sex and no plot! :D

i hope you enjoyed writing it as much as i enjoyed reading it

I enjoyed it, straight & to the point.

I rate this story as a big Zero. True seduction begins in the mind; mental seduction. I read some of the comments on here and they say "oh finally no plot or not building up, just sex" what's described is someone hiring a hooker for a few hours of cheap screwing. Anyone can stick a dick in a hole to get his rocks off. But if a man can't get a woman wet before he even touches her, then he's not a man yet. Whispering to her what he wants to do to her..the whole pleasure IS THE BUILD UP. That calls for mental and physical stamina. Any man or woman that wants to get right to it is just looking for a hole and QUICK because they have no stamina for true passion. Sorry but true.

It's a nice hot little story. People mostly like it. That guy wished it was different--big fucking deal! Get over it.

I loved this story - made me hard as rock, my breath come in gasps and a great desire to go and wake my wife up from her nap and do her, hard and fast.

As a side comment, it's always interesting to me that the anonymous nay sayers are ... anonymous. I think it must be because they are afraid to stand by their comments.

i loved that story to be honest i love the way u said every word....good job