by Uncle Pervey
Your use of CAPITAL letters and "quotation" MARKS weakens, not strengthens your poems. You write doggerel, OK! So did Charles Dodgson. That does not mean your poems are bad, but just let us read it! We don't need your weird forms of emphasis. If the poem flows properly then the reader will automatically know where to put the accentuation.
- Jeez Unc, GIVE "it" a "REST"!!!
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"New Poems Reviews"
Happy New Year~
Art~