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Fringe Benefits

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by Anonymous08/24/09

Great story-telling!

Erotic, erotic, erotic!
It's completely refreshing to read a well-written story (I get distracted by poor grammar, misspellings, lack of or incorrectly used punctuation, poor syntax, etc).

This is the first of your submissions I've ever read, abd I can't wait to sample others.

Thank you so much for a great story.

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