All Comments on '"... the lucky ones!"'

I just have a couple of questions about the formatting. Were the {i} inserts intentional? I had never seen them in a poem before. And the word "revolation"...did you mean revolution or perhaps revelation? They both fit, in a sense....

art I think it is <i> word </i>; Lauren had posted a whole list in a thread I think it is called "Formatting Question"

if we remember it. This jumps out in floormat and runs

around wild. Just like war.

"put a hot cup of coffee in the freezer"

I love that so much.

Very interesting write. I too also loved "put a cup of coffee in the freezer". What is the meaning of [i] and [/i]?

with those in question

of the [i] things , BUT,

it left me with thought,

and your use of metaphor

was savoring....

~sGp~

Ought to do a quickie edit

Now that you know how to italicize

With <I>the proper tools</I>

Instead of [I]square brackets[/I].

Ought to do a quickie edit

Now that you know how to italicize

With <I>the proper tools</I>

Instead of [I]square brackets[/I].

what became of mine soul. TK U MLJ LV NV