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Crossing the Line

byLesly Sloan©
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by Anonymous06/01/06

Nice Lesbian tale!

I liked the boss-employee plot.

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by Anonymous04/21/09

Too short

A few more pages will do nice

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by Anonymous08/03/09

LESBIA_EXPERT

YOUR STORY WAS TO SHORT AND WHEN YOU WROTE IT YOU MADE HER CUM TO QUICK THE FIRST TIME AND DIDNT DESCRIBE THE NEXT ONE VERY GOOD

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by Anonymous03/26/11

Wow

Incredible story!! True? X

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by Anonymous06/05/13

hot

hot fuck gooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddd story

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