If the penatration and actual sex had lasted longer and been more detailed this story would have deserved a five. Nice build up, but fulfillment was not intense enough.
Hard from begining to end. But your stories are getting shorter. Does seem you have the same intensity as your earlier stories. But it was still GGGRRRRRRREAT.
first time ive felt the need to leave a comment, best story ive read in a long time. I love your style. thx :)
Your story is a wonderful narrative, and I agree with others, it is very exciting. Bue, as good as it is, you could improve it a lot. Use your narratives to paint the settings: What the pool looked like, what they were wearing, what the saw, heard (background), and felt. Instead of you narrating the story, like you were an announcer standing at poolside, relaying the action to your reader, let your characters tell the story. When you say some one said something, let them say it. Using dialogue will make your stories even better.
Your stories are very arousing. You build the action slowly and purposely. I appreciate your style.
That was real nice, just the kind of thing that any healthy person would enjoy happening to them, Luv your style.
great story, love your style! makes me want to be there too :)
I loved it
Excellent narrative. But I would like to hear a bit more how the body sensations feel, rather than just what goes on in the mind.
As sexy and as moving a story as all you've written (I'm a fan). But (oh how I hate "but"s) I do think you could go further. It's okay to write a story! The shame and the remorse we take for granted or we wouldn't confine these things to our fantasies. I wish you could allow yourself and Josh to really have fun in a story, to go way too far. You don't have to base your stories on things that really happened, or almost happened. Enjoy yourself more!
one of the best i have read, just has to be abit longer
All of your stories are sensual as hell, and you really know how to draw it out untill the story itself is like an orgasm. Bloody brilliant!
oh my fucking god...i wanted to blow before i even touched myself...u must write more
Finally! After three stories of (very exciting) foreplay, this excellent author lets her boy have what every son yearns for--his cock up his own mother's twat. In earlier stories Mom had her eye on her boy's big dick, whether it's making a tent under his fly or out in the open where she learns to love it. Knowing her son is hard makes Mom drench her panties. Josh, of course, as a healthy normal lad, has been real interested in his mother's cunt for years. For Josh it's the greatest, most special cunt in the world--it's the one he came out of! Like most all boys, nature's programmed him to get back up there with his hard manly cock. Mom plays games with Josh, even beating off his prick. She loves feeling his rich boy cream, but they both know it's time for Josh to shoot that cream up where it belongs. Now in the finale his mother lets her darling Josh snuggle his stiff dick up her warm loving motherly twat, surround his prick with mommy-cunt, and blow his balls up his own birth canal. What a fabulous rush for any son! No other experience can compare! And Josh is going to be a proud and happy young motherfucker for years to come!
awesome story but it needs more dialog.More passion. more mom begging for her sons cock. what she wants done and how.
i am 38 have sex with wife but i want a mother like you who can share her experience with son ans son too i am available here firstname.lastname@example.org
there is no real fun in doing it in the pool.
I hate the fact that I'm having sex with my son, but he is so young, and strong, and good looking, he's iresistable. His dick is so much bigger than his fathers ever was, and he makes love much longer and better than his father (the only other man I've had sex with). I know he is my son but I need that man.
I've never had sex with my mom, but as a teenager I lusted after her, or at least an idealized fantasy of her, and your stories are very similar to many of the fantasies that I had.
After all these years the comments keep coming in on JaneB's wonderful stories of hot motherfucking. I think the key is that this fine author has actually gotten her boy Josh to fuck his own mother, as all boys dream of doing and as so very many moms dearly wish they would! Take the lady a couple of comments up--she tries to fight the urge but she simply cannot resist her boy's big fat prick, she NEEDS it up her mature cunt. Mothers naturally love what their boy's got swinging between his strong young legs, they love what her son's got filling his big loaded balls. A boy shooting his rich warm semen up his mother's twat is the best feeling he'll ever have. What a sense of fulfilled achievement, fucking his own birth canal and emptying his balls up his own mother's gash! Nowadays with the silly old restraints fading fast I bet there are many tens of thousands of boys who shove their young pricks up their mother's wet welcoming cunt every day. No big deal, no anguished soul-searching, they just fucking DO IT! And then mom and her happy young motherfucker grin at each other. Look, a mother's twat is the natural home for her boy's hard cock, the nature-given receptacle for his loads of creamy sperm. Soon, aside from a few timid assholes, there won't be any boys denying themselves this greatest pleasure life has to offer.
Would have loved to fuck my Mother-In-Law. Nearly did once. I am also convinced janeB fucked her son...;>)
Absolutely loving, caring, erotic, and so very passionate!
I remember you from many emails many years ago. Such erotic emails they were. Such naught confessions.
For years I wanted to fuck my mother. I would watch her in the shower through the glass and imagined stepping into the shower with her and fucking her in there. When my mother would be drinking and sunning on the deck, I would be touching kissing her while she was drunk. There were times when it seem like I would get the chance to fucker and I even caught her a few times fucking other men. She had such a beautiful body. One night while she was drunk she French kissed me and I really liked it. I probably could've fucked her and gotten away with it I'm sure the sex with her would have been great! Although I did feel guilty about that, I still have that fantasy I'd like to fulfill.
. Now she's in her 60s and I thought about that actually living out that fantasy. I turn 39 and two weeks but it's probably something that will never happen
I saw my own mother in a short sheer nightie several times. She was the first real woman that I got a good look at her incredible,curvy mature body. I think she had no idea that her teenage son would have incestuous thoughts about her dressing like that with no cover or robe.She has small firm breasts,little nipples and great ass and legs,very smooth legs. I wanked off many times thinking about her sucking me ,or me fucking her,licking her all over.
JANE IT'S BEEN SEVEN YEARS , COULD THIS BE YOUR LAST STORY. FORGIVE ME FOR ASKING BUT ARE YOU OK ? YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT, IT WOULD BE A GREAT LOSE TO ALL US READERS IF YOU GAVE IT UP. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU AGAIN. I WILL KEEP AN EYE OUT FOR YOU. I'LL READ YOUR STORIES OVER AND OVER. A FAN FOREVER. LAROC OF AGES
The stories are told as though you're talking to yourself and us "he said / she said"; it somehow works, but it's a little bit awkward.
I admire that you've shared your fantasies with us, and also respect your choice "not to let them happen" as well as your honesty. I dislike that some readers are trying to tell you what to do, what they want to see in these stories. They're ignoring that "these are your extremely personal thoughts", not stories about made-up characters that can be manipulated. They're also ignoring that the stories are not building upon each other; one after the other, to a crescendo. The instances happened at different times and since you did not pursue activities, there was nothing to build open except inside your fantasies. Whereas; if they had actually happened each instance would've taken you farther down this dark road.
I have to wonder if your decisions have changed since the last have been released; were you able to abstain, did you give in - if so, what was the outcome?
I feel for your tortured soul; I recently met a very young Grand Niece that I have this situation with. We don't have your long-term history; it started out so innocently, snuggling while watching moves, wrestling, tickling. Unfortunately it's taken a turn for the worse, for any time she touches me "even if I don't see her coming", it's like being Tazered. My body goes almost Super-Nova in an instant & she knows it. I mean literally; I'm rock hard, every muscle is tense and just short of orgasm. She has climbed into bed numerous times; snuggling, spooned, wrapped her arms around or over me, she's holding my hands, fingers entwined. It's like it's what both of our bodies want "unconsciously". I've woken up to her happy, laughing sighs, murmurs - it's so friggin adorable - and nerve-wracking because she doesn't even know she's doing it while she sleeps. OMG; but I have to fight it all of the time. I'm not excited because she's my Niece; as matter of fact "that's why I don't give in". Truthfully; if she weren't; I'd be all over her; I want to get to know her, to hug her nonstop, to make love to & with her, to touch, kiss, lick her everywhere, etc.... It feels as though she's my soul mate, and I want to be with her always, I know that I want to marry her - BUT I can't! 8~(
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