All Comments on 'Sibling Erotica'

I liked it get the next part out soon.

Started out good and ended with one waiting for the next part.....

Sorry

it was good as far as it went but like 90% of the usless writers on this you can't finish a story if you aren't going to finish then don't post at all

fuck yeah tommy-boy! that was a great read! waiting for part 2!!!

it was good but don't leave us hanging... really?

something is wrong if an 11 year old oldsmobile is breaking down i drove a 66 ford until 05 and it was going strong must be the way you drive

hey this is Anastasia and that was pure fucking amazing u need to make the second part i check everyday for the second part. You are amazing writer weird or not that was kick ass so make more please please !!!!!!!!! anna_bear_26 hit me up :) :) :)

Well done, James... beautifully written.. I played with myself reading and the orgasm left me weak in my knees!!! Can't wait for part 2 and another cum!!

can't wait for the next part - although if I had been the sister (and I have been the sister in a similar situation ;D ) I would have turned over and offered my pussy there and then...

James,

You must get back to writing again, I know from my own experience what a high it is to be with your own sister and experimenting with her in what has to be the most exciting sexual exploration there is known to man. Keep it up!

To how this one unfolds. Great so far!

I want to read the rest!

there was a few glitches (door being open, then the brother opening the door, etc) but I really enjoyed it :)

sexy. write more or this story fuckin please!

half a story (and this was much less than half) is worse than no story at all. you would have been better off LEAVING IT UNPOSTED.