Once again Sarahhh goes (and gets us) above and beyond with her work. Your descriptive words arranged just so were great, but I think it was better how you put us in the eyes of the guy at the podium and had us feeling how he felt. Well done once again lovely, well done.
> I loved it
> I thought of you
> you cock tease...
> I felt myself then thought of you
> I rubbed my nose
> I held my member
> I thought of you.....
> Thr tease, the tease, it is too much
> I wonder yes I wonder
> I wonder if ever,if ever,if ever
> if ever I can.....
I loved this, Sarahhh. Great job, Thanks. It made me smile!
Sarah, Sarah, until we meet
I'll dream of you my sweet
But the image of you in those little shorts
Sends me into a frenzy of sorts
C'mere you little cock tease
Let's see you beg and say please
The big dog might give you the bone
And make you squeal, squirm, and moan
(Hey, luv, why don't you do a poem about fellatio and do that word thing?)
i found the poem very erotic, and stimulating, in all the right parts of the body. makes you want to grab the nearest body.
I need to break out my dictionary and my thesaurus for this one! (I mean that in a good way)
You teased my cock with your prose
I'd love to fuck you while you're in hose!
You brilliance is astounding. Looking forward to more teasing and pleasing.
Sarah: you are such a hot lady both verbal and in sight. Your words are always a treat as is your body. Ethan
Saraahhh your words make me hard, your thoughts make me want to explode.. your insights make the world want to shag your beautiful body day after day, hour after hour.. second by second! Cookie@yahoo.com
Sarahhh, your poetry is exemplary, for those of us who have learned all the buzz words for that lovely little place, you have hidden under your panties. If it is as magnificent as that lovely titty, on your profile picture, it must be dynamite.
your stories are really good, i wish you would write more poetry
Wonderful poem, everything from Sarahh is well done, but poor Sarah, it appears her clit is on the lower right hand side of the picture of that wonderful pussy. No wonder I had such a hard time finding it when we were at the Lake...
Can I try to find it again Sarah?? - Jim
Imaginative, lustful, taunting, but is it teasing if there is a payoff?
Nice work. Hope to see more, Beautiful Lady.
have a hole new reason tolove poetry-thank you for opening my eyes to it :)
Great job on the poem! You really made me 'feel' it! Keep Writing.
To think I waited till now to read your poem! As always your intelligence is meshed with your beauty. A masterpiece to say the least.
I usually hate the poetry that shows up on Literotica, but this is really good. It is funny and imaginative and makes me think that you have a proper appreciation for your pussy and what it can mean to a man. Well done!
IT`S THE FIRST POEM I`VE READ IN LITEROTICA,HAD TO READ THREE TIMES TO REALLY ENJOY IT.YOUR HEART IN THE POEM IS THE ONE I`VE BEEN SEARCHING FOR THATS ONE HEART I`D LOVE TO BREAK,GIVE US MORE.
You have a great skill will words... Please write more poems
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK VERY GOOD
The poem is sweet fun and sexy of course, but when I read the many pages of what your writing does to people I can see you are on to something bigger then the above.
Good Poetry! Good Pornography and a very clever presentation. Thoroughly enjoyable.
I realize the this poem is old for Sarahh but DAMN can this woman write! Always sexy, current, clever and willing to go to the edge. Sarahhh needs to write a full length novel!!!
Erotic concrete poetry. How beautiful. Shame the upload to Lit spoiled one line. You are something sarahhh
by the way i love your poem & your stories, by the way i seduced my brother & i gave him my v my Cheri & so he deflowered me, by the way we named our daughter Sarah actually because He loves "Sarah" the name ;P
my e-mail is : firstname.lastname@example.org
The head of my desire inflamed, blood engorged cock gently touches the portals to your secret place, as it easily slides into your passage you lunge against my chest legs parting wider to make entry impossible to deny, you feel the well rounded fround around the head bump over the corrugation of your spot and you squeeze trying to keep it there, then we both release and feel the waves of our addiction sweep over us.
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