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You’re My Bitch Now

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/05

blackmail not rape

if someone stupid enough to let someone blackmail them that doest make it rape.

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by Anonymous10/05/05

If she said no

at any time, it's still rape...

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by Anonymous12/01/05

why can't I have neighbors like that

Enjoyed it very much

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by Anonymous12/06/05

very hot

i really liked this story, good discriptions, it really got me going.

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by Anonymous01/05/06

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

loved it made me cum very fast

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by don8765405/14/06

Good, but could be better

The vacsectomy ruined this story. I don't know why it is....these stories are supposed to be erotic and mostly fantasies. I don't know what is wrong with the housewife, neighbor,neighbor's daughter, etc., etc. getting pregnant in them. I think it would be a "blast" for my wifey, daughter, sister, or girlfriend to get pregnant by the neighbor stud.

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by Anonymous07/06/06

One small suggestion....

SLOW THE HELL DOWN!!

It's ...nice, but fantasy? I think not.

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by Anonymous07/08/06

great story

hey if the husband is not home she is not married LOL

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by Anonymous07/08/06

your my bitch

Can I come to your next party?

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by NaughtyAngel7507/22/06

Delicious!

I'd also like to be invited to your next party. ;c)

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by Anonymous08/02/06

Drunk Horny Bitches

Drunk horny bitches should be fucked. If they agree to it, then that's even better

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by Anonymous01/31/07

nice one

awesome story excellent wriitng felt almost liek i was there and a belivealble story line

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by Anonymous09/21/07

fucking retarded

This was poorly written, inconsistent, and you really ought to stay away from the keyboard in the future.

No one acts like that in real life; your fantasies are pathetic. I'd be surprised if you got laid once in 5 years.

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by Anonymous01/02/09

ignore the bad comments...

This isn't a grammar or English class. This is hot sex using words. If it can be read and understood, who cares? Your story had me playing with myself the whole time. A sexy rape fantasy? Dirty black mail? What's not to love!?? Keep the stories *cumming*!!!

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by Anonymous11/09/09

Response

Just thought i'd respond the the "fucking retarded" comment...maybe you should try finding different woman to spend your time with because this story is exactly something i would do *giggles* wouldn't have an issue, infact i almost beg for this to happen hehe. Wonderful story as well as the second half xo♥xo♥. i hope i get a chance to live this hehe

♥~ golden_lace

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by Anonymous11/11/09

Loved It

ignore the criticism. Rape on this site is only in print. just because someone writes about it,does not mean they approve of it. Thought it was a very good story, I am looking forward to reading chapter 2.

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by katxmeowx12/05/09

Fantasy

Fantasy is just that, some can happen and a lot of women want a man just to take her no questions asked, keep writing I loved it.

Kat

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by Anonymous01/28/10

liked it

liked it but it wasnt really "rape" she enjoyed it far to quickly!

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by wait2play07/27/10

I am so hard right now

An amazing tale about getting a perfect piece of tail. I am so hard it aches right now.

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by peebudy07/28/10

howdy neighbor

goddamn that was hot!

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by Anonymous08/22/10

Grammar

I'm afraid that spelling/grammar errors took away from your storyline.

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by Anonymous09/17/10

wow

that was terrible. don't show any women your stories. they aren't hot.

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by Anonymous10/12/10

Have you ever been laid? This reads like awful porn.

Seriously, I'm not saying this to be nasty but I really don't think writing is for you. This has a plot with no structure and the dialogue is so unrealistic, it sounds like some ironic, post-modern, college performance about sexualization of the media.

The way he "grabs" his camera is ridiculous. And the 'you can give my pussy one lick'? No woman is that easy and if they are then they wouldn't want to stop at one lick. In fact, scrap that... have you ever met a woman?!

This is like reading something written by a fourteen year old. Ignore all the good comments on here, please, these people don't know what they're talking about, they must be high on meth or just so sex starved that they could cum watching an advert for cleaning products.

Sorry if this it too harsh, but it's honest.

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by Anonymous10/16/10

holy shit.. that is what relationship with my man is like in the bedroom... he calls me his little whore and we also have a deal.. it was like he wrote it... damn

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by Anonymous11/08/10

Differnt

did not notice the spelling and grammer errors, I thought it was exciting

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by Anonymous12/04/10

Bummer

No plot, no seduction, no personalities. Why bother?

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by Anonymous12/04/10

Doesn't matter about the plot to me. Got me excited and I wish that girl was me! That is my fantasy too! Wish I had a neighbor like that!

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by Anonymous12/04/10

I totally enjoy reading this story. Turns me on every time! Keep writing please.

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HOT!

I couldn't even finish it this first time through. I came so hard!!!

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by Anonymous01/23/11

I'd like to be your neighbor!

Hot story. I came reading this!

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Good Neighbour

Would be great to have a slut neighbour like her next door. :)

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by Kinky8803/15/11

I Wish that Were Me

Damn, I wish I could be the sexy neighbor. This is my fantasy, too.

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by Anonymous01/20/13

I'll be you're bitch

Loved this story, it's absolutely perfect! I have this fantasy and now seeing someone write about it makes me hope it comes true. Found it by accident but wish I had found it sooner, hope you keep writing.

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by Anonymous04/27/13

Hey, it does happen

My wife was raped by a black neighbor and he took lots of pics and made her agree to be his slut. A few weeks later she refused him and said it was over. So, he came over and showed me the pics. He said he was going to put them on the web unless I sucked his cock. I did it and he took pics of me doing it. Now my wife and I are both his slaves.

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by Anonymous06/23/13

wish someone would blackmail me and use me like that. i'm a bi male and fantasize about being used alot.

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by Anonymous08/03/13

I agree about the dialogue. Could have been a bit more racey and less technical and 'scripted'. I suppose the idea was good and I wouldn't say a terrible read, but needs work in my opinion. I would say keep trying but you obviously appeal to some people. Biggest change I would strongly suggest....repeat of 'oh no please don't get me pregnant' not such a turn on. Quite the opposite. Good luck with future stories :-)

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by Anonymous04/05/14

Good story

By the very end I had cum.

The vasectomy takes away from the fantasy, and she enjoys it too quickly (I love a bit more struggle even if she's soaking).

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by Anonymous06/06/14

like it

Imagine my surprise when I went looking for a story to masturbate to and came across one which used MY name (Sabrina)... awesome

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by Anonymous06/09/14

Correct form of "your" and "you're"

You used "your" incorrectly EVERY TIME and it dried me up like a cactus in a drought. "Your" shows possesion of something like "YOUR cock" or "YOUR tits". "You're" is a shortened version of "you are" like "YOU'RE enjoying this aren't you?" or "YOU'RE so wet".

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by Anonymous08/15/14

Go to Church

Yall need jesus

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by Anonymous10/30/14

You Fucking Ass Hole

Ever heard of Jesus? Well if u haven't,get a fucking life and say "my body belongs to josie" because I'll rape and fuck your brains out if you don't!

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