All Comments on 'Broadside Girl'

It now appears that the Literotica “webification” process has stripped out the spaces between the notes in the above “music”. This means that my Windows Notepad suggestion doesn’t work. You can probably (in Notepad) reconstruct the spacing because there is, mostly, one note per syllable. If all else fails, and you don’t already know this tune, mail me and I’ll send the text file with the spaces.

Oh yeah, and there’s a missing “me” in Line 14. Mea culpa!

Evelyn

for it's play on hooker life. nice all the way around. i'll have to get the explanation of the musical behind it. nice work!!......don

very nice and easy read, not to mention humorous and very well thought out, the addition at the bottom sprinkled some more spice to a delicious poem, thanks (~_*)

became one of my favorite Lit poets! Thanks for all your work. This one's a hoot!

~Syn