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Maidenstar

bySabledrake©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/13/05

Great!

Fantastic, Christine!

Makes me want to know more about the characters... especially how did the girl get put under an enchantment to become a sword? Wonderful, sensual lovemaking... a nice change of pace from your other stories (not that the others aren't as good, mind you!). Keep up the great work!

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by lucky-E-leven04/13/05

Wow!

I haven't read anything like this in a long time, and I'm now motivated to read more of your work. You have a true gift for description and I especially appreciated the little bits of intrigue sprinkled throughout the story. Very nice work. Thanks for sharing.

~lucky

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by SeaCat04/13/05

A truly good story

I truly enjoyed this story. I was surprised by it flowing as smoothly as it does. Most fantasy bores me but this story didn't. Keep it up.

Cat

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by msboy804/14/05

Great Fantasy Romance

You have an incredible writing talent. Thanks for sharing your fantasy world with us.

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by Alex De Kok04/15/05

Sometimes I wonder

The wonder is why do I continue to try to write, when the competition is this good? And then I tell myself, keep writing, because only by writing will I improve.

A superb story, elegantly told. Colour me jealous!

Alex

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by rgraham66604/15/05

Very nice

Such eloquent language. And such a sweet build up and climax.

Nicely done.

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by Sunnie04/16/05

Excellent

Beautifully and artfully written. Well done.

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by Anonymous04/17/05

So Sensuous and Romantic!

I loved it! You are such a good story teller. I was totally brought into their world and now I have to know more about them both and what will happen next. If only I could write like this. Really wonderful work.

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by Anonymous04/27/05

Wow! from Tia

What a lovely story! Really erotic and romantic. The characters were so alive and really in love. I hope we get to read more about them.

Tia

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