Makes me want to know more about the characters... especially how did the girl get put under an enchantment to become a sword? Wonderful, sensual lovemaking... a nice change of pace from your other stories (not that the others aren't as good, mind you!). Keep up the great work!
I haven't read anything like this in a long time, and I'm now motivated to read more of your work. You have a true gift for description and I especially appreciated the little bits of intrigue sprinkled throughout the story. Very nice work. Thanks for sharing.
I truly enjoyed this story. I was surprised by it flowing as smoothly as it does. Most fantasy bores me but this story didn't. Keep it up.
You have an incredible writing talent. Thanks for sharing your fantasy world with us.
The wonder is why do I continue to try to write, when the competition is this good? And then I tell myself, keep writing, because only by writing will I improve.
A superb story, elegantly told. Colour me jealous!
Such eloquent language. And such a sweet build up and climax.
Beautifully and artfully written. Well done.
I loved it! You are such a good story teller. I was totally brought into their world and now I have to know more about them both and what will happen next. If only I could write like this. Really wonderful work.
What a lovely story! Really erotic and romantic. The characters were so alive and really in love. I hope we get to read more about them.
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