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Bachelor Party for Two Ch. 01

byJoey Midnight©
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by Nightowl2204/24/05

Hot start

This is quite a ;ap dance the lad is getting.

I'm guessing there is going to be two women in a 69 pretty soon.

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by Anonymous04/25/05

Great start

This was really hot. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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by gizzmo30104/25/05

good story

Wow this is a hot story can't wait for the rest

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by Anonymous05/03/05

Great Story!

Wow! I've never been moved to post before but that was really hot!!! Thanks for sharing it.

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by Anonymous05/20/05

Can't wait for the next chapter

when is the next part coming?

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by Anonymous06/21/05

When does it pick up?

Dying to read the next part of this one, have to say that this is one of the hottest I've read on Literotica to date, and wanting to know exactly where it'll go next with the "second show". Its been a while since part one was posted so... please! Can we have the rest soon? XD

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by Anonymous03/28/07

What a tension builder!!

Great story but wishing/hoping it stays as just the threesome!

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by Anonymous03/26/09

Tease

Excellent, a real tease and a disapointment that part 2 isn't there (yet??)

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by deadone10/10/10

I feel like Joey

Bursting, waiting for the??

Loved the story.
Please before I turn blue and they pop finish the story.
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Just wait for all the men haters to slam it.
They will point out that only cuckold stories belong here.

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by Tavadelphin02/14/11

HOT!!

Really a good read and exciting enough to be real and fantasy fodder too heh

Please don't leave everyone hanging

Steve

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by Anonymous04/06/11

more

MORE MORE MORE!!!

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by DWornock09/04/11

Boring

Far too unrealistic to be sexy.

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by Anonymous09/04/11

DWorncuck has too much spooge on the brain

Everything is boring after ingesting gallons of semen

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by Anonymous01/24/12

I like it

I want him to get what he wants. I love a man who gets satisfied with another woman, especially if it simultaneously turns on/humiliates his wife/girlfriend. Please keep writing!

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by Anonymous02/18/13

is there a chapter 2?

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by Anonymous12/02/13

Chapter 2

PLEASE write a chapter 2 SOON! That story is so hot!!!

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by Anonymous07/29/14

No writing skills whatsoever !!

Not even decent stroke story. Just shit. "1*" .

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