All Comments on 'First Encounter'

by Sensitive_Man

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sweet

That is a well written story, with only one mispelling, (expect for except). Your story excited me, to an erection and I often fantasize, about being w another man, because those were my first exp's. I do love women tho, and so I go by bi-curious. I enjoyed the story line, but as a critique, I offer the suggestion that the two men make love, as in attention to the other sensitive parts of their respective bodies, work up to a mutual or close to mutual climax of super ejaculations.

I rated u 100%

Rudy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice Start

Nice start. The story is hot and the idea of losing control during the proceedings appealed to me. There are more mistakes than just the one Rudy found, mistakes in grammar, tense et cetera. The spell check program can't compete with careful editing.

DexicreonDexicreonalmost 19 years ago
Nice story

This reader wishes it were he who was involved. Well done. But please don't forget to edit carefully.

robin48robin48almost 18 years ago
syruppy sweet

Very powerful line:

"The cock tasted sweet and the precum sweeter as it dripped in my mouth. "

I liked the oral to anal description.Another straight cherry popped.

jfh55jfh55about 13 years ago
Hot storie

Very erotic story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
My first encounter

I to will be experiencing My first encounter with another man soon and am very excited.

I have only been with women before but have always fantasized about being with a man.

Sure hope it goes as well for My first experience like yours.

mike

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
i wish I was involved

As i read this story i pictured myself with this new beginning it was pretty hott

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hit Story

Such a lovely erotic love story. So gently, yet so firm. I hope you two had many more times.

joeywhorejoeywhorealmost 5 years ago

This is really exciting looking forward to more!!!

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