All Comments on 'Shattered'

I think you need to edit the poem again

but there is something about your poem

I like that gets under my defences.

b'brig

or twilight poem zone <grin>

very gripping and interesting, clever

and mystical. I enjoyed the read, thanks

in the review thread.

A sobering poem about the fragility of life and the unpredictability of death.

I could feel the pain in your heart from this piece. It had as much hurt as the first poem had light and fun in it.

*hugs*

all the way straight through the core of my soul......nicely done.....don