All Comments on 'The Velvet Tango'

cute and quick read, delightful~

enjoyable and nicely choreographed dance.

a pleasure to read,

thanks.

~ J

Love with a lil musical twist,

gotta love that~!

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...this line:

"Lust and passion serenade "

...and I always like exploring the connections between two of our primal passions, music and sex.

"Fusing souls no longer seeking

With ecstasy’s desire"

That's a wonderful line, perfectly conveying that moment of union that allows for the completion of two people.

Nicely done!