All Comments on 'poetry hard-on'

Loved the whole poem.

Your imagery is crystal clear.

Great form and excellent flow~!

More plaese Oh Word Wizard..

Also your word play... Superlicious~!! *grins*

Great writing and imagry. I loved it!

Defintely a great one! The words seem to be active, not just words on a page. The visualization is the best!

....hits the poetic G-spot. Fast and hot!

Tess

Your word play hits my c-spot.

What great beginning lines!! I love it! Fast read, smooth flow- very much enjoyed. Great imaginary and I definitely like your style.

and enjoyed it right from the start. it was a lightening like strike poem all the way......great job......don

Kisses, ~Imp

Grammer explained in erotic terms. These are not words your fourth grade teacher taught you. Magic words poignant and delicate ~ with a touch of eroticism.

It's all in the head; the wildest erogenous zone on or in the body.

It's all in the head; the wildest erogenous zone on or in the body.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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while jumpin and jivin listening to us snore. TK U MLJ LV NV