All Comments on 'The Wife's Debt'

A good first story. This shows the hurt that can be caused by re-acting before all the facts are known. I will look for more from you.

q>Davis paused to a second. "I just wanted her to know what a slut she was. What she did was the same as what I made her do."

I sighed. "You have said that before and it makes as little sense now as it did then."<Q

it is the stupid part that messes up the story for me.

Good writing. To explain what the husband meant: He made her do what she already had done. I.E. She had sex with a man that was not her husband, so he made her have sex with 10 men. Got it? Good.

I know it can be the end but it leaves much to resolve.

I feel that anyone that would force something like that on their spouse doesn't really love them. Just loves to have them around acting the way they expect them to.

The only item for debate is: Who is sicker?

Them that write it?

Or them who like it?

It was good of its kind. Do another one soon.

A good cautionary tale for all the revenge freaks who read and comment on stories classified as loving wives, about wives who commit adultery. I am not a Christian, but it reminds me of the story of Jesus and the woman caught in adultery, where He said something to the effect that those without sin should cast the first stones.

It's a good story, and well written. It's not very erotic (and this venue is "Literotica"), but it's an excellent tale about the true cost of revenge. The part about the new allergy medication was a particularly nice touch.

-- KVK

Extremely depressing story, but an excellant portrait of a vicious, sadistic bastard of a husband. the Ct. Yankee

I think it effectively points out that careful considerations are due when much is at stake. It also points out that both people may have made mistakes. Suppose she shot a person while drunk or after taking the pill and one drink. Would she be guilty or --

My question has to do with the premise that new drugs aren't tested properly against alcohol. Surely it ain't so on something this basic - so she didn't read the reaction information on the bottle or script accompaning the pills - or it wasn't there - its possible or start the lawyers up.

Regardless - Nice work author - with Regard

This story had a very strong point of view, and you expressed it superbly. Thank you.

well written interesting story

Good story and I would like to see what happens to the couple in a year of therapy.

What adult doesn't know that you don't take meds and drink alcohol?

As are most, but not all, of the comments.

And certainly not erotic-Only a sicko would get a hard reading this

Drinks while taking prescription meds? And why didn't she turn this alcohol/drug-fueled libido on her Husband? Alcohol lowers inhibitions, it DOES NOT make you do something out of character. My Dad used to refer to it as the "real truth serum".

A MOST UNUSUAL STORY. DISTURBINGGLY WELL WRITTEN

ever made on this site contrasting a one-time drunken grope and an affair. That distinction is what makes it possible for adults to get beyond the first and not the second. The husband, a proxy for the uni-syllabic throng of frequent commenters in this category, behaved irrationally.

Well done.

ever made on this site contrasting a one-time drunken grope and an affair. That distinction is what makes it possible for adults to get beyond the first and not the second. The husband, a proxy for the uni-syllabic throng of frequent commenters in this category, behaved irrationally.

Well done.

I wish this person had kept on submitting to Literotica she was good.

Good story with a theme and a point that is sad but true. Wonder what happened to them?

Well conceived. Well written. Well edited. Well Done!

A PI as the voice of morality. Like a low rent Mannix episode.

It makes no sense. The Courts don't care about infidelity. She'd get the kids, the house, alimony, child support and half his retirement. Dump the asshole and be done with it. The kind hearted PI was a joke. Bad story. 1 star.

Eat shit annony!!

For bonnietaylor2/vastiesmith2

go suck a cock asshole of LIT!

That puts a different light on.things. Too late now.

Sad, but a good story. What an arsehole the husband is. Can he repair this?

Nooo!!!!

make;s no sence .

It's a sick but a good story. Are you writing more stories?

This story points out the need for real communication between a husband and a wife. It also points out the lack of information about the drugs that we take as a society. Yes, the famous drug companies print out a huge page of information about the interactions of their drugs, most of which the common person can't understand. The doctors and the pharmacists don't tell you about the interactions unless you ask and even then they don't always know. I know this from my own experiances!

Thanks for the sad true story, 5 stars

Communication is the key, here and in real life? Forgiveness? Only after communicating. This is one were counseling would have been very appropriate.

And: "Anonymousabout 1 year ago

stupid

make;s no sence ."

Dude, learn to spell. Or at the very least use spell check. And punctuation is not one of your strong points either. Sad.

This one is a sad story that turned even sadder at the end. Varode is/was a talented tale teller, why she hasn't added any further stories is a shame in itself ......

Sucky story

1 star - I hate this story.

Thankfully, you never wrote another.

Excellent story.

Very well written little story. Perfectly integrated background history without any of the needless and boring “we met in high school” nonsense. This author knows precisely what it means to “show, not tell”, demonstrating devastating emotions through the actions of the characters. And it is an excellent commentary on BTB dynamics. Bravo!

A man with integrity, albeit a little late. A follow up showing how the husband pays would be appreciated.

Excellent story. Prescription medication and alcohol can totally alter someone's awareness, balance, inhibitions, etc. Had a medical issue 10 years ago and was prescribed a "mild drug to regulate everything". Never told not to have ANY alcohol. 3 nights later was in my favorite bar with my girlfriend, had one 'easy' Tanqueray and tonic, 10 minutes after finishing my drink, and before sipping a refill, I got up to use the restroom and crashed sideways into a wall. One drink all day and had breakfast, lunch and dinner. Didn't realize I had a severe allergy to an ingredient in the medication. Found out in the hospital because 911 was called and everyone thought I was having a heart attack. But anyway.... thought the PI was was going to tell the husband, "while we were watching your wife, one of our cameras picked up you in the parking lot getting a blow job. What do you think we should do with that tape Mr. Davis?"..........

Well done. Thank you. This was one of those dig two graves situations.

Different, and brilliant, and humane. Thanks for doing this piece. We needed this as an offset to the BTB at all cost for any provocation nonsense that proliferates on this site.

Very good exposure to both sides of the event. Thanks

Different, but true, in many ways women are the weaker sex. A good wife and mother are worth more than pure gold. At best men can be compared to Roman short sword, the best of iron, yet brittle. When it snaps a master in this case a wife will work the fires to unite both pieces of a sword. It is difficult and hard work to heal a worn-out man! After forty years of marriage, I have come to understand my wife's worth, it is immeasurable!

@Hardday1953 and the author.

Hardday excellent comment.

Author excellent story 5* I dont give those often.

The PI should leave the cameras in place to record the 10 blow jobs the husband will have to give in penance for his undeserved cruelty to his wife. The beatings he gets along the way for propositioning men in a straight bar will be free life lessons he sorely needs.