by annaswirls
but i'm still trying to interpret it.....another strong piece......don
This is laid out beautifully and runs through mind
like lighting. You keep waiting for the shock to
blanket you. sand
The beholder ... beauty at its best~
Loved this romantic sensual lil poem.
Made me think ... dream ...
Love that in a poem.
Lets you explore and seek the *you* inside~
Anna you are a true poet. I love your writing, imagery, flow, form ... All that is you ... poetry~
the skill aspects in your work...you have structured a wonderful piece of verse...bluerains
Rodin and Camille? As Rodin would say 'Now's the time to enter the cathedral' I'm with 1201, if this isn't erotic, you are going to burn when you write erotic.
b'brig
If this isn't an erotic poem, then I don't understand it at all?
Wait, it is not erotic because it is romantic? Well whatever it is, it is damn good.