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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
love the imagery....

but i'm still trying to interpret it.....another strong piece......don

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 19 years ago
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Non-Erotic? did I read that right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
smooth

This is laid out beautifully and runs through mind

like lighting. You keep waiting for the shock to

blanket you. sand

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
mentioned

this poem was mentioned on the thread

New Poems Reviews

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
i like

beautiful skills

and i agree with 1201...not erotic?

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Beauty~

The beholder ... beauty at its best~

Loved this romantic sensual lil poem.

Made me think ... dream ...

Love that in a poem.

Lets you explore and seek the *you* inside~

Anna you are a true poet. I love your writing, imagery, flow, form ... All that is you ... poetry~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I agree with

the skill aspects in your work...you have structured a wonderful piece of verse...bluerains

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Lovers?

Rodin and Camille? As Rodin would say 'Now's the time to enter the cathedral' I'm with 1201, if this isn't erotic, you are going to burn when you write erotic.

b'brig

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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If this isn't an erotic poem, then I don't understand it at all?

Wait, it is not erotic because it is romantic? Well whatever it is, it is damn good.

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