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A Day of Love

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by Anonymous

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by don8765403/29/06

Great reading!

Nicely communicated to a lover.....

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by LeBroz10/24/06

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A private note
So publicly shared
Revealing emotional depths...

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by duddle14612/15/06

intimate.

Loved this unabashed declaration of love. Makes me feel like breaking into a chorus of "I got a crush on you Sweetie Pie" Seriously, this was a lovely positive rendering.

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by KOLKORE06/19/07

It could never be A DAY...

You could choose:
either be a proffessional card writer and make tons of money OR:

Be a secret lover of many broken hearts OR:

Best of all (but least financially secured); continue with your one to whom you write so well and let us watch in awe and get inspired more

One thing you have to know we never buy at all, it can not be one day...

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by tazz31706/10/12

THIS IS GOOD

BUT WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME TOMORROW. tk u mlj lv nv

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