by ~hellbaby~
Sorry that a 5's the best I can do.
This piece is so innocently wickedly funny
makes me want to reach out and give your friend a kiss
a long slow lingering kiss
a deliciously savory kiss
a kiss that keeps on giving......
<meltdown>
This is a cracking bit
of poetry hb, I just
love the innocence it's laced
with!
Really great work here,
thanks.
~ Jenn
Had me ROTFFLMFAO!!!!! You've got a gift hellbaby!!
Thanks for the enjoyment.
So, so. Nice attempt at humor, but nothing else really going for it.
Hit me after I was halfway thru this---and I guess any 'Mike' with a last name of 'Hunt' will demand that he be called Michael!!!