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Nice...Very nice...I like that you did the out of the ordinary thing. Sometimes that is needed to break the monotony. I'm a sucker for a good spanking myself. Of course, I'm into a few other things too, but I won't announce them here.
I like the step by step progression of this. It flows smoothly and gradually progresses onward to an end. And I liked the way you didn't just end it with the climax, but drifted to a slow stop ending with the few words of the title. It made it a bit sentimental there. Very nice.
This was very nicely done. I agree with WindStormy completely. Although, I'm not into this fetish, it did add a bit of eroticism to this little progressive situation. The entire piece was most erotic and alluring. Keep writing, dear....
When they told me I should read this, I had no idea what I was getting myself into. But now that I've read it, I am very...Um...Well...Maybe I should explore this some....
What on earth has come over you, Ben? You are completely out of character these days!
This was absolutely erotic. Nice. Gradually pregressive. You didn't loose me, though I had initially thought I was coming to read a story, I find your style refreshing.
Very well done. You caught my attention right off with your style and provocative imagination. Right up mine and WindStormy's alley...Lol
Lol...When you get WindStormy's attention, you get the attention of all of us. *Snickers*...
Very nice, hon. I'm just tingling all over to try this one out. Good job with this. Keep writing, okay?
I am just taken with this! Nice work sweetie...Love your style. And what an erotic situation!!
This was quite good, Kinda. I enjoyed reading it very much. Your delivery and pitch was enticing and definitely captivating. For a fetish, it was delicious in its detail and the reactions.