All Comments on 'Welcome to Temptation'

Loved that. Good story, well written and good atmosphere. Can't wait for a sequel :)

Wonderful start! Can't wait for more!

I can't wait to read more. waiting in glorious anticipation

We're not even at Temptation, yet - so we're all waiting for more!

Lukas

and then.......the flashback is (nearly) completed and we fast forward to them in the car as Kit gazes lovingly at Calvin. Camera wideshot panning out of their car passing a sign reading, "Welcome to Temptation, An Easy Place To Get To And A Difficult Place To Leave."

--voice over--- "Next week on Temptation...."---

Camera Fade to Black

Liked your story, just so realistic.