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"New lues...

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by Anonymous

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by 10/04/05

Your poem...........

........is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Tess

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by f-cynyr03/05/06

and the pump

don't work cous the vandals stole the handle

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by LeBroz10/07/06

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Okay ~ I'll give it a 5
For the beat;
Almost something to dance to!

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by duddle14611/30/06

fascinating rythmn.

This rythmic poem could almost be converted into Rap. The poem is fast paced and moves rapidly from verse to verse - almost as if the Poet is in a hurry. Interesting!

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by Amyfriend02/28/07

Ultra descriptive...

"with their white teeth and ya starin' eyes". The images were just pouring out as I read. Nice job.

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by LeBroz07/21/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.



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by DawnJ08/18/11

Musical

Your rhyming makes a definite rhythm for this "tune"! Cool!

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