All Comments on 'Bun in the BBW Oven'

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EvertideEvertideover 18 years ago
Not usually my thing, but not bad

I came across this story by accident whilst browsing for pregnancy stories, but I read it through anyway. I thought you captured the picture of a loving couple that doesn't let anything physical stand in their ways quite well. However, you made one boo boo: You said that she was seven months pregnant, then later said that in three months the narrator was going to be a dad. That'd make her ten months pregnant. Tsk tsk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A tale of love

Lovingly told. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I loved it .....

Thank you for a sweet, romantic, loving, erotic, sexy story .....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A little tenderness and a lot of lust...

Definitely makes the world go round...Hope to see more!! All the best, Tacit Blue

justboycrazyjustboycrazyover 16 years ago
Very well written

I loved how this story has the lust and passion mixed with the tenderness. Great story!

FatBottomedGirlFatBottomedGirlover 16 years ago
Beautiful

such heartfelt emotions. so clearly defined on ths page. made me smile and want to call my man. thanx for sharing!

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