All Comments on 'Lar and Van'

by rydia57

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Almost Impatiently Awaiting The Continuation

Needs a continuation with him continuing to fuck her and even making a baby with her.

tinman69stinman69sover 18 years ago
Great story!!

I liked this story! Mainly because I find myself feeling just like he does!! To bashful or shy or whatever to come out and say what is on my mind.

It does need to be continued, VERY MUCH!!! I would like to see them having an affair and later being caught by his daughter. Maybe even have the two girls do each other while he does her ass again!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
agreement

I agree with earlier comments. We need more stories about Lar and Van -- or similar. As an older man this plays right to my fancy ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
da bomb

this is a very good story i'm very impressed by your writing keep up the good work. mr. c.a.t.

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