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No Longer There

byRedHairedandFriendly©
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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz10/17/05

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Wow! Now this is powerful !!

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by sack10/17/05

bittersweet...

In the second stanza, consider replacing "sits" with "rests".

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by Ronnie Wachuka10/17/05

Living respected and dying regreted

The pain is gone and the memories linger on. Outstanding. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by My Erotic Tale10/17/05

touching

I like the flow and the way this read, The touching words that I feel from reading this, leaves my mind....no longer there

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by My Erotic Tale10/17/05

touching

I like the flow and the way this read, The touching words that I feel from reading this, leaves my mind....no longer there

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by tazz31701/07/12

ALONE IN A CASKET

being farewelled. TK U MLJ LV NV

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