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Appalachian Trail

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone10/18/05

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and ribbons of light blue memories
this line stikes me, at first it seems out of place - it isn't. you seem to do that, it is always a challege, worthwhile

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by Anonymous10/18/05

Snake bitten

Some really clever use of language, here! A delightful trip down the trail, Anna, thanks for taking me along.

Fly

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by sack10/18/05

loved the subtle imagery.....

Have you ever actually hiked the AT?

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by Anonymous10/18/05

yes

I have hiked it many times-- pieces of it actually not the whole thang. :)

the whole chipmunk attack I only saw in photos from my little brothers camera in H.S.

the rest is just invented of course...

you?

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by Anonymous10/19/05

I loved this

You really have a way of making the moment come alive.

Curiouswife

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by Anonymous10/19/05

Confused Twaddle

Fright on the Appalachian Trail? Bovine scatology. Only a wimpy, unstable mind could come up with stuff like this. Learn how to write clearly. It might help with your day job too.

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by RhymeFairy10/21/05

Picturesque ~

Anna,

I soo get this. I too write like this at times. It is great to be able to let go and just write what you see ... feel. I have hiked a lotta trails and this happens a lot, eh~ Your imagery is great, a lil funny and sweet too.
I like it, thats all I'm saying. *grins.

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by LeBroz12/29/06

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Excellent aural photograph, when read aloud;
And as for your eunuch critic, well, his shortcomings are obvious.

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by LeBroz12/29/06

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Excellent aural photograph, when read aloud;
And as for your eunuch critic, well, his shortcomings are obvious.

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by duddle14601/30/07

Alive

Apprehension on the Appalachian Trail. Lovely references to nature in the raw.

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