and ribbons of light blue memories
this line stikes me, at first it seems out of place - it isn't. you seem to do that, it is always a challege, worthwhile
Some really clever use of language, here! A delightful trip down the trail, Anna, thanks for taking me along.
Have you ever actually hiked the AT?
I have hiked it many times-- pieces of it actually not the whole thang. :)
the whole chipmunk attack I only saw in photos from my little brothers camera in H.S.
the rest is just invented of course...
You really have a way of making the moment come alive.
Fright on the Appalachian Trail? Bovine scatology. Only a wimpy, unstable mind could come up with stuff like this. Learn how to write clearly. It might help with your day job too.
I soo get this. I too write like this at times. It is great to be able to let go and just write what you see ... feel. I have hiked a lotta trails and this happens a lot, eh~ Your imagery is great, a lil funny and sweet too.
I like it, thats all I'm saying. *grins.
Excellent aural photograph, when read aloud;
And as for your eunuch critic, well, his shortcomings are obvious.
Apprehension on the Appalachian Trail. Lovely references to nature in the raw.
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