All Comments on 'When He Cheat Me !!!!!'

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delegregdelegregover 18 years ago
Hmmm

Very nice story, arousing and hot, made my blood boil.

Thank you !

A few small comments though (tongue in cheek, 2 cents psychology) :

On the last paragraph, you would do this if he cheated you ? Out of grief or out of love ? What about if he wanted you to ?

On the "Anal" theme, Minn's getting it good, what about you ? Writing an enticing story about a theme, including your character, but leaving it out ?

Anyway, thanks again for a nice story with a twist, hoping to read more from you, i leave you to ponder on things...

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