by dundurn
It is nice when three people can relax and enjoy thmselves. Doer19
I didn't care for the homosexual aspect of it but that's just my own preferrence. You handled it very well and manged to make it sexy even for someone who doesn't care for it - nice job! You might have rushed just a little in a few places, where perhaps a bit more time could have been spent in developing the mood, but again that's just my personal preference.
While the writing style needs a pit of polish - it's rushed - the scene is perfect. It reminds me of a similar situation as a teen but sadly I didn't get that far with her or him. I can't help but wonder now if the girl in my tent had been this cool and I had sucked the guys cock. It would have been so fucking hot. Just typing that is making me hard again.