by Wes99
Very well done! Romantic, erotic, and a good ending. Hope you write more.
Amazing and incredible! Perhaps the story of the year. This is the highest of the form. A genuine gift to the reader. Wonderfully sensual and tantalizing, and unsurpassed in its character of erotic tenderness and love.
I have been a regular Literotica reader for a several years now. I have found some brilliant, wonderfully touching, and highly erotic pieces along the way. But this story is special among the best.
There are gems of priceless wisdom here. There are some great statements of the finest elements of lovemaking. I think anyone coming of age in their sexuality should read this story. And though I'm well past that springtime of life, I felt honored to be reading it. I can't say I've ever encountered that before--feeling honored to be reading a story here.
I'm quite serious when I say this should be developed into a film. There are the elements here for an amazing literary film. (Dare I say "art film?")
Wes99, thank you for this story! It is brilliance.
She wasn't teaching him about being a great lover. She was making him her 'boy toy'.