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by Anonymous01/18/06

Loved it!

Even though it was over quicker than I'd like, I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks!

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by Anonymous01/18/06

Nice hot tale

Great detective story!

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by Anonymous06/14/07

Great erotic humour

This is a fun story, a bit hard to believe, but a really good read, deserves a follow up. Would have liked a little more description of the protagonists

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by Anonymous09/20/08

Not Good!!

well first of all the story was unrealistic and second the dialogue was forced!!!!
none of it flowed naturally!!
a dissapointment!!
story never concluded properly either!!
no good description!!

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