All Comments on 'Someday She'll Know'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Something like a cross

Between the old Red & new;

This new style has more impact

While engaging in themes of the old.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A dance in 3/4 time

To perform this dance takes two

watch the couple on the floor

and the shadows on the wall,

the couple move right

the shadows do too

couple left, shadows right

sometimes together, sometimes not

this dance will never end

till time shall be no more.

Thank You. Ronnie W.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006

thanks for the journey

Art~

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Submission

Is will stronger than inclination? Does it matter? Makes you think. What a dangerous game that sometimes gets played.

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