All Comments on 'You, Me, and a Pool of Astroglide'

Wicked, sensual and AWESOME... did i mention great?

arousal. Great job, sexy and sweet and full of love.

with a touch of humor at the end. It could have used better editing, and some questions arose in my mind, but I enjoyed it anyhow

Hot, hot,hot! I loved the use of all the senses but I wanted more! I wanna hear all about the pool of lube,I'm kinky like that!

Wherever do you get your inspiration? ~Imp

My imagination is on overdrive right now. You had to drop it off and let the reader complete the rest of the scene, did you? Oh damn! I'm going to have some fun with this. HOT story.

I really enjoyed your take on phone sex. :) Great story, Salvor!

fun story!

...and the story cinches the deal. Thanks for a well-written, fun read.

Rumple

You rock big daddy! Loved it. Now i want to know what he is going to get her.

Great story... I'll never look at lube quite the same way again.....

Sal, you are the King of Tease! Very hot how she teased him over the phone like that! It was a tasty snack of a story. Good luck.

Love your twisted mind.

Abs.

i grinned all the way thru! what a fantastic tease!

now i'm off to see if you have any other stories... Thanks!

Sweet, sexy story! I really enjoyed it.

You've definitely got to send it in!

Kisses,

~The Word Whore (AoMS)

should have been a warning at the start of your story. LOL

Nice story, fun, hot and well paced.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

A very fun and imaginative scene. :) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!

Punctuation is important if one wishes to earn my five.

The story is refreshing and cute, but grammar errors and minor bugs made it a four (IMO).

Well done.

The title alone made this worth the read! *wink* Great job!

The many ideas one can get from this tasty little story...well done *wicked wink*

please tell me there is a part two!