All Comments on 'The Case for Doing Debbie'

by Mike Franklin

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DeepQuestDeepQuestover 18 years ago
Best of the Best!!!

This writing is intense and highly arousing. Well written and well thought out with no detail left uncovered. Very Hot!!!! A perfect 10 out of 10.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WOW

FUCKIN AWESOME REALLY LOVED IT

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
really hot

Was really sexy totally got me going!!

delbertmdelbertmabout 18 years ago
Wow!

I wish I could find a woman like that. That was awesome!!! Super hot!!!!

UnpluggedUnpluggedabout 18 years ago
deserving of a high lit ranking

Erotic, sensual, and seductive. Forbidden fruit is the sweetest. Well done doing Debbie!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WOW!!!

Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
enjoyed it

nice work....you paint a very see-able picture

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Amazing

Best story i've read on this site so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story...but

Do a little jazz research next time LOL!

Brubeck is a pianist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Well Done

That was the best story I have read. I usually don't like long stories but you did your thing.

allitnilallitnilabout 14 years ago
Great anal story

Really enjoyed this one - I can imagine several more stories with Debbie and her daughters, I'll bet they are as kinky as their mother.

CuchulainCuchulainabout 14 years ago
Absolutely amazing!

This was very hot! Thanks for the vivid description of an intense session!

bookstore manbookstore manover 13 years ago
Doing Debbie

Thanks for the great intense descriptions - I too am waiting for part 2!

tnadnudertnadnuderabout 10 years ago
Undecided

Not sure if I'm looking forward to tales of more family times (maybe tricking/seducing Mike?), or begging you to stop after so many mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Absurd

She plays Dave Brubeck and he guesses John Coltrane?

Jazz moron.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Driving home?

The guy had several drinks and then drove her home? What an asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not badly told but.....

Both sisters and now the Mother? EEEEwwwwwwww. This guy was a thoroughly detestable asshole. Typical lawyer. Just awful.

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillalmost 9 years ago
Just one question...

Enjoyed the story but.... How can a Woman that is 5'10" be classifies as petite?

bumblegrumbumblegrumalmost 4 years ago
Excellent

Many thanks, Mike, for this HOT story. Thoroughly enjoyable. Perfect? Of course not (maybe use ad editor) but basically acceptable and you have to identify with the two principals. I, too, would like to see more about these two; certainly would be worth reading. Well worth five stars, more if they were available.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Only got 1 page in and decided the lawyer is a douche. I'm out.

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