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Cradling the Universe

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by logophile02/18/06

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Oh, I do love a good haiku.
And I love babies, too.
Love it, Selena. Thanks for sharing.

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by duddle14612/22/06

birth.

Haiku for a new born child entering the Universe.

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by LeBroz02/03/07

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Excellent illustrated senryu (though if pressed, I might opt for zappai, since senryu is not just about human nature but is also supposed to be humorous).

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by tazz31701/15/12

TO HOLD A LIFE IN ONE HANDS

the joy of my atavist. TK U MLJ LV NV

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