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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
cute

the last line gave me a chucklebone

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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A hot little write

Why should girls have all the toys?

Nice finishing touch.

One small point - change the possessive to a contraction -

the your to you're. It's such a small detail that proves to be jarring.

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