All Comments on 'Scouts Gone Wild'

You're welcome, Miss Red. It was a pleasure to edit such a wonderful story. *kiss* Besides, I like seeing my name at the top of your work in the shout out area. *cheeky grin*

Talk about a boiling point!!!!

Thanks for the read sexy Red! as always..kisses

Joey

You never cease to amaze me...buying cookies will never be the same...I enjoyed this satire way more than I should have...and I just may have to buy some more...lol

I Did it all for the Cookie!

Great stuff Red - as always.

DC:

You continue to amaze me with your ability to write your way through each of the various catagories in Literotica (with great sucess, I might add). Your wicked sense of humor came through with flying colors. Thank You. Ronnie W.

There was just enough twisted humor in this story to keep it light, but not so much that it took away from the sheer sexiness of your words. Will you EVER be able to face your troop again?!? ;) Nice diversity in the action, and as usual, HOT...HOT...HOT! Hey..got any Mint Chocolate Chip left?

Only complaint is that you called "Betty" "Becky" at the end.

Hate to sound like an old English teacher, but: "edit, edit, edit!" While the story was definitely a funny, fresh take on a porn cliche, the repeated spelling errors created some distracting "bumps" in this otherwise pleasant, arousing romp.