All Comments on '04' Friends'

by midnightj

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lindianalindianaabout 18 years ago
I like it!

One little nitpick...I think it would work better as Lovers, Come and go...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Lover created...

Friendship to Lover ~ finest kind... Warm and enticing...

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Second lindiana's sentiments plus, take that last word and put it on its own final line, "forevermore."

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