by RedHairedandFriendly
Very good; leaves enough unsaid to make a couple interpretations possible.
My thoughts were that the more she cried the lighter her load, very nice mental image and wonderful poem.
Putting words to work, making them pull thoughts and feelings from the readers, is an art. You do it well.
Putting words to work, making them pull thoughts and feelings from the readers, is an art. You do it well.
DC:
Reading it several times I came to different a interpretation each time, so I have to agree with LaBroz. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I see what LeBroz meant; has she overcome her problems and is now soaring emotionally or has she solved all her problems by leaping off a cliff on high and is now soaring quite literally? What I'd call interpretive poetry.
and that is the way it should be......free.....nicely done.......don
When did this come out lovely Red...it's beautiful and as others have said, can be interpreted differing ways allowing the reader to see themselves in your poem..
Though in despair ~ she sees the far off peak of freedom. In time ~ once more she's on the mountain ~ soaring. Lovely illustration sets the mood.
can be one of life's emotional medicines... Well done, it was beautiful and left food for thought.