All Comments on 'Untouched'

Interesting that these words were thought, felt so long ago. Long before reality, long before even the hint of possibilty actually existed. Words that ring so true now, words that have become even sharper in affect now that I have indeed seen your soul as you have seen mine.

The build up, the tease, the passion here promised for a future release. This is hot stuff!! TF

Sexy, stuff here. Great

build up of

words, images

jumping out, awaiting his

... touch. Love the flow here. * Smiles *

You pegged the anticipation

bullseye in one ~

More please ~

this is one of the most arousing poems I have ever read. WOW! The almost unbearable tension, the strong build up, the aching need it conveys; please keep writing, you have a new fan!

this is one of the most arousing poems I have ever read. WOW! The almost unbearable tension, the strong build up, the aching need it conveys; please keep writing, you have a new fan!

Playing catch-up here ~ sizzlin' hot! Knowing a bit of the story helps but certainly not necessary to feel the vibes of building lust and want with which you've written here.

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