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by SunrockSin

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
poetic

I enjoyed the trail left by your passionate pen (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
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you are skilled with internal rhyme and repeated sounds, makes your poem flow so smoothly, pulls the reader along... very nice...

~anna

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