All Comments on 'Magical Heidi'

Nice beginning, you should keep this going I like the characters and you have a nice writing style..

Can't wait to see what happens next with these two beautiful women. I hope you won't wait too long to give us chapter 2.

really good way to begin. The lapses into fantasy were handled well, just enough of an image to get me going--and hint at VERY hot sex to come. Don't keep us waiting!

Kittn01, Great start, you have my interest, now don't keep me waiting, I want more!

When I read "combat boots" I almost switched to another story. Too trite, too pat, I thought. Cutey pie meets butch dyke, again.

I'm glad I read the whole story! Very sensual, and the fantasy sequence is a real stiffener!

keep going,keep going dont stop

Thanks for what promises to be a riveting story. I really like the characters and can't wait to hear more about them.

I enjoyed this so much. The attention to detail was magnificent. Thanks so much to the introduction...

That was one, sweet, refreshing story! What's the chance of more Kristi and/or Heidi?? You done good!

SEQUEL PLEASE!

Please please please don't end it!!!!

More please more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for sharing this story, it was great. I wish you would add another chapter or three to it.

But don't let it end right here! Please continue so we can see where this goes.

Too bad there hasnt been any further chapters in the past ten years. It could have been magical.

More please.