DC: I know why you left it where you did, you tease. Please don't take as long for ch. 05 as you did for ch. 04. Great story. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Articulate writing with great ability to capture emotions and feelings in words. Congratulations! Tom C.
this story was FABULOUS until u ruined it with heterosexuality. why would you ruin something so beautiful with heterosexuality????????
Always a male writer, no matter how well he writes lesbian erotica, always has to hedge his concept a little and work in some "real" sex with a man no matter now improbable, preposterous or what damage it does to his story! LeAnn
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AHHHHH . . Hell
DC:
I know why you left it where you did, you tease. Please don't take as long for ch. 05 as you did for ch. 04. Great story. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Wonderfully sensitive stories.
Articulate writing with great ability to capture emotions and feelings in words. Congratulations! Tom C.
major let down
this story was FABULOUS until u ruined it with heterosexuality. why would you ruin something so beautiful with heterosexuality????????
Great story until...
Always a male writer, no matter how well he writes lesbian erotica, always has to hedge his concept a little and work in some "real" sex with a man no matter now improbable, preposterous or what damage it does to his story!
LeAnn
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