by acdd123
Christ, this story got old after chapter 3, chapter 18 is overkill. How many times do you have to read about his huge cock and all the big titted sluts ready to do anything to be fucked by it.
When he was shot it should have been fatal or had him become impotent but oh no you feel the need to bring your creation back for more it would appear a time for conclusion of this story is long past do the kind thing and finish it off.
You should have ended this garbage in the last chapter. Continuing on with this mindless and poorly written tale is futile on your part. Do everyone a favor and kill this series off, and judging from the responses of people in the past on this series. Get some help for yourself?
Great story!
Now how about a series about the magnificent Polly & her daughter Vicky?
That would be fantastic!