All Comments on 'Lou's Limb'

Good use of metaphor here. Your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews.

Good use of metaphor here. Your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews.

usage of metaphor is delightful and I liked the title very much...different...blue

Another interesting change here

But then, I have been rather idle of late;

Missing much that's been wrote for nearly a couple months.

An interesting mataphor on the perils of love...