by Willow Rain
Dreamy, sweet, and so poignant. You pull
us into your restful love, and make the sandman
slumber in his wake ... Great imagery and write.
Thinking I shall have to read more and more
of your poetry. * smiles.
Asking myself, what man could resist this kind
of love. Just so real, caring aww sheezz..
ya get the point, love this one gurl ~
More and more please~ grins*
was that of a knight home from battle but then realized that the descriptions could easily be a metaphor for a businessman coming home, briefcase in hand. Wonderful imagry.
I can't really say just what it is that makes your poem stand out. But it is marked! It is ribboned! Marvelously cloying! I feel a kind of warmth and soul in those words and their finite structure. I measure a blessing in those elegant phrases and Stanzas! Absolutely tremendous!
Let your homecoming be quiet and restful ~ Sleep - then awaken refreshed.