All Comments on 'Eyes With Red Coals of Fire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Keep it up...

Steamy, but needs more details and kind of felt rushed to get it all out there. I also had a hard time telling what the old lady was saying, and what the Dr. was saying. I did like the story however- just want you to slow down and elaborate more.

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