All Comments on 'Your Gift'

Very well written! Would love to read more work like this. Thank you for making me wish it was me! (On either end!)

DC:

Think A Horny 'ol Sailor could sit in for the next session? Thank You. Ronnie W.

Red,

Such a languid sweet journey as your main character makes the sexual voyage she's dreamed about for so long. You brought out the sexual yearning and her hidden desires for all your readers to see.

I love the unique narration of this story; it makes her thoughts yours and gives it an intimate feel, as opposed to the feeling that you're an outsider looking in. Very sexy!

Ditto to the plaudits already stated. I loved this story for so many different things. Well done again to one of my fave writers.

I'm usually not a fan of the 2nd person perspective, but this one was amazingly well written! I cannot find adequate words to describe this other than WOW!!!

Well done!

The POV used here is usually not my favorite storytelling technique, but here it works. I felt as if I were right there on the bed, perhaps helping open the gift a bit. I loved how the story's slow simmer turned to a full boil the way the flickering in my belly gradually turned into spasms around my clit.

Extremely descriptive, and ohhh so hot.

Thank you.

*****