All Comments on 'The Ride'

was mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

was like listening to the speaking clock, only with less of a human voice. my speak and spell was sexier.

If she/he has a speak and spell, and is commenting on voices off an adult site? She/he shouldn't even be here, and ontop of that, they must be cold inside. Don't listen to jackasses like that. Keep up the good work, you made me cum in under a minute when you were cumming. That's quite a feat

DC?

I think it's warrented. I didn't listen to the audio because 10 + minutes of sound is forever and 2 days on my computer slaved to an old land line. Sorry! Thank You. Ronnie W.

I like the way this was written, Red, almost as much as the material itself. The narrator said only what her master would have permitted, keeping it tight and controlled. The result was that we, the readers, were kept on a verbal leash. You're getting better and better!

Usually I say it is our immense pleasure, as the reader/listener of your stories, but it sounds like you enjoy your work every bit as much as we do! What a treat!!!!

You out did yourself Red!

If you can play with you daddy that will be coolllllllll

RED: wow---that was . . .fun.

That was amazingly hot. Your master is very lucky to have as sexy a woman as you so devoted to him. We should all be so fortunate :P...

If that wasn't a real orgasm, you deserve a academy award.

What I like most is the way you've planned out your own submissive lifestyle and the rules surrounding it to get maximum eroticism out of it. I could easily play the role of Master in these circumstances.

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I was there, seeing every thing you did - the hot way you told this story, acted it for us was amazing!

Such an incredible telling of your submissiveness. So well told and felt. Your voice, your climax making it hard not to erut before the story is even over. Thanks

she's so hot.

Fuck that was great, I could jerk to that very day, Cummings an all