All Comments on 'Cruise to Alaska Day 01'

Excellent!!!! Loved this story:-)/ You are a very sexy man, and a killer story teller.

Rudy

Do you need a passport for an Alaska cruise? No

Would you learn how her pussy tastes or get kissed during "an occasional table dance"? No

Do you need an editor? YES

The errrors are minor and didn't detract from enjoying the story. The passport question might refer to stops in Canada, though it might be only atarting in 2007 that may be required.

"My hands found her beasts." I bet they were!

this was written in 2006 yet is still as current and original in 2010 -so love your work

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.